Wow, this is terribly written. "Speeds more than 20 miles more than the speed limit" is clearly redundant. The sentence which reads, "In fact, she did not want to go to the hospital only when EMT's persuaded her to go did she follow their advice" is also poorly written and lacking punctuation. How are these people hired to work for a news outlet? Better yet, are these "articles" even proofread? KDBC clearly needs to hire some new talent.
January 24, 2013 at 3:28pm Anonymous
Wow, this is terribly written. "Speeds more than 20 miles more than the speed limit" is clearly redundant. The sentence which reads, "In fact, she did not want to go to the hospital only when EMT's persuaded her to go did she follow their advice" is also poorly written and lacking punctuation. How are these people hired to work for a news outlet? Better yet, are these "articles" even proofread? KDBC clearly needs to hire some new talent.